Providing Constructive Feedback to Agency

Thank you for taking the time to present to us earlier this week on the 17th February. Really appreciate your team's effort

i meant this= Dear Subhan
Thank you for taking the time to present to us earlier this week on the 17th February. Really appreciate your team's effort and creativity.
Your presentation included posts CTA with launch of tickets etc, however we had launched the ICC Ticket Sales successfully on the first week of February already.
The presentation narrative “Fans miss out on cricket because they simply cannot secure a ticket” was no longer in play as tickets to main matches had been high in demand, long sold out, being launched the first week of February.
TCS kay sath “The Crazy Scene”- The word “Crazy” does not align with our brand personality please.
TCS (The Cricket Sensation)- again our positioning is of a “Ticketing partner”. Previously we have gone with TCS (TCS Cricket Sath Sath). “The Cricket Sensation” is too generic please.
I really like the red box sticker idea, however, we would have to follow a lead-time of at least 45 days, in order to activate such a campaign country wide.
Humbly, What I was more looking forward to was a platform-wise (FB, IG, LI, YT, Tiktok) timeline of posts, with platform wise sizing, aligned with the callendar of the ICC Matches (and mostly the Pakistani matches).
After conclusion of the ticket sales. The calendar of matches has been our core focus, specially the Pakistani matches.
To take things forward please find enclosed a link of products & services. Request please come up with new corresponding posts accordingly for the month of March, keeping in view the Ramadan factor.
Ref. the cricket campaign, the delayed start time (17th Feb onwards) impacted our schedule, and more importantly, we feel the overall direction presented doesn't fully align with our current goals and vision.
To take things forward for the March calendar, please find enclosed a link of products & services. Request please come up with new corresponding posts accordingly for the month of March, keeping in view the Ramadan factor. And if possible can we have a look at a suggested timeline of posts for March next week Wednesday or Thursday please.